Saturday, 27 April 2013

Book 09 The Bottle Factory Outing Beryl Bainbridge - Masterful storytelling


Beryl Bainbridge is one of those authors I have always wanted to read and I suspect I am not alone. Nominated for the Man Booker prize five times you know she is no slouch with a pen. So it was pleasing to see her on the list of books I am to choose 100 from to read in a year with my lovely man +Daniel. We are both realising that we are on track to complete the task although it is early days and already we find that nicer weather brings more chores and less time to read.

I picked this next on the list as it was relatively short and I could easily carry it on my recent business trip to Cornwall. I read most of it on the train back. In between glimpsing the brilliant countryside that particular trip provides. In fact a few times I put the book away after glancing up to see we were crossing a vast bridge over the sort of picturesque valley you see in picture books. Stone built farms next to a babbling brook with green fields leading to forest and sea. Another distraction to my reading time but one that improved my Instagram output.

Photography is a major hobby and part of my life. I keep dreaming of one day making it a profession but the jump from regular day job to erratic self employment seems so vast when we still carry debt on our backs like a weight of oppression. At least the debt is nearly gone so new dreams can begin.

I start this blog with that little mundane preamble, as it is appropriate for The Bottle Shop Outing, which is a strange little book about mundane people doing mundane things but having dreams of something more in their lifes. Of course the book is also about something completely different which is always the mark of a good writer. There is an awful lot of information packed into 200 pages but Bainbridge is an artist at allowing just enough information out to fire the imagination and ensuring your head fills with more detail than she ever offers.

The story is of two women in their early thirties who share a bedsit in London and have secured a job at an Italian run bottle shop. Most of the other workers have been brought over from a small Italian village to work for the wealthy Mr. Paganotti and speak little English. In fact their dialogue is so colloquial that the Italian owner hires a translator for disputes. The Italian workers see their boss as their saviour and would never say a word against him or the deplorable working conditions and pay. This is the obvious reason he has accrued wealth.

The two women are thin Brenda who allows herself to be subservient, and the luscious and larger Freda who has aspirations to be a movie star and marry a man of wealth. To say they are an odd couple is an understatement. Whereas the male version of that moniker relied on slap stick for humour, The Bottle Shop Outing is a much darker affair where the jokes come at the expense of another character’s dignity.

Both women are sure how others see them and both are wrong. It is this expert unravelling of their true selves while being privy to their slightly deluded self perception that makes Bainbridge a master of her craft. In peeling behind the everyday bigotry and prejudice that the characters present she is peeling back the layers of the society in the early 70s. Much of the humour is set within the language and cultural differences between the two English ladies and the Italian workers. As well as a burly Irishman. All the while the jokes are laid at your feet and you are unsure whether to laugh or be embarrassed. Layered throughout this dark humour is an extraordinary tension that something is going to go terribly wrong.

The outing in question is a bus trip to a stately manor and the whole factory has awoken with possibility. While Freda presumes that everyone wants her, it is Brenda in her meek subservience that attracts more attention. Freda is horrible to her friend because of this but then Freda is fairly horrible to everyone in her self opinionated righteousness. The Italians see the day as a day of great freedom and little by little it is revealed that the company is not as generous as it first seems with a Sunday being chosen and everyone putting in to pay for the bus and food.  

Nothing happens as it should and the outing itself is nothing that is planned. Many of the workers miss out on the day and those that make it end up with a day of farce and tragedy that will change the lives of some forever. Part of the humour is that keeping face and social position is as important for some as change is for others. When we are afraid of change it tends to be thrust upon us.

Much of the story appears to be the preparation for the big day out but in reality is just a chance for us to get to know the characters and have a bird’s eye view into not how many people had to live in London in the 70s but the inner workings of these people’s minds and ultimately ourselves. It is not always nice viewing as we get to see the difference about how we are seen and how we see ourselves. Most of all how we treat others based on what we think they are.

There are some excellent scenes with love fumbling in unusual places and too many people in the bedsit can create all sorts of mayhem. Especially when a gun toting mother in law shows up to put the wind up Brenda for leaving her drunken abusive husband. Brenda really is the saddest of the group. Brought up with manners so impeccable that she can only say no when she truly wants something and has to say yes whenever she doesn’t want to for fear of offending.  

Despite her obvious weaknesses we are constantly reminded that she has left her husband. A courageous thing to do at the best of times but there is no applause for this act as she is judged but what people see and not by what she has done. Bainbridge has stated that this character was based upon herself that probably accounts for the darkness of the honesty shown Brenda.

The outing occurs and the bad thing brewing occurs and thus begins an even darker part of the book as all the early character flaws and fears are the basis for covering up a tragedy that befalls the group. The humour is more biting as social appearances are pushed to the limit while at the same time adhered to in a traditional sense but in the most surreal circumstances. I found myself laughing at the silliness of the people but gasping at the seriousness of the situation. Those socially embedded responses can be used to cover a multitude of sins.

Bainbridge is artful enough to provide a mystery and even directs the answer but never actually brings it up in an open scenario. All the clues are there. All the players have played the part expected of them. Only Brenda is the potential loose canon but she chooses the easier path. To allow things to lie and to return to her parents. After her ex in-laws refuse her advances.

Flawed characters in dank settings with no real hope within their trapped existence but handled with such skill by a masterful practitioner in the art of writing that the darkness is tinged with lightness and a love for life that endears you to the tale and the people within.

When I finished it felt complete.

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